Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @daleaustin.4136! Welcome to our feedback of 'day one!'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Dale AUSTIN

3 years ago

I'm talking about a person I worked with an fell in love with them from day one an that was 8 years ago